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Kavita जन्माष्टमी की धूम
21-08-2011, 11:03 PM
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जन्माष्टमी की धूम
गोपियों की मस्ती में सज रही है दही हंडियाँ
आओ यारों हम मनाए कृष्ण की जन्माष्टमी
बारिश की बूँदों के बीच मस्त है ये गोपियाँ
प्यारे कान्हा देख रहा है गोपियों की मस्तियां
दोस्तों की टोली बनकर घूम रहें है गली गलियाँ
मन में है जोश, गोपियों में चले तोड़े हंडियाँ
बच्चे बूढ़े नाचते हैं उनके मन में है उत्साह
ये खुशी की सदा रहे पल, ये है सबकी मन में चाह
एक एक कर मिलती है हाथ जुड़ जाती मुट्टी इन गोपियाँ
तालमेल से चढ़ जाते हैं तोड़ते है हंडियाँ
लडकियां भी कुछ कम नहीं है चलती हैं ये साथ साथ
गोपियों को देतें है टक्कर तोड़ते है सब हंडियाँ
इस उत्साह को भंग करती है नेताओं की चालबाजियां
पैसों की लालच दिलाकर रोक देते है मस्तियां
आओ गोपी धूम मचाओ कर लो तुम रे मस्तियां
दृष्ट लोगों से दूर रहके तोड़ दो उनकी हंडियाँ
... सुरेश अय्यर
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avi, neha
21-08-2011, 11:53 PM
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RE: जन्माष्टमी की धूम
Firstly nice effort in writing in Hindi ! In Hindi section, this looks cool Cool

My hindi is not so good, will read it later & post my feedback, but I assume it'll be good Biggrin

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sureshmiyer
22-08-2011, 12:05 AM
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thanks, do read it and give your feedback

cheers
suresh
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22-08-2011, 12:09 AM
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Sure !

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22-08-2011, 11:50 PM
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Superb ! congo
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04-09-2011, 10:24 PM
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thanks neha and avi

cheers
suresh
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