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kasoor
29-07-2011, 05:40 AM (This post was last modified: 14-08-2011 08:45 AM by angel.)
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kasoor
gaflat me hai hum , ya hai , koi khwab ye sarfira,
kisi anjaan ke liye, hum khud ko , luta kar bathe hai!
[gaflat - galatfahmi]


kal tak to tha mujh si hi , shakal ka wo bhi,
anjaane hi jise hum aaj , khuda kar bathe hai!

ansoo to the bahana bhar , unki ek najar paane ko,
suna hai magar , buri najar se wo khud ko , chupa kar bathe hai!
[bahana - reason]

hairaan hai , puri umar sholo se khelane waale , hum,
na jaane kaise ,chingari se haath , jala kar bathe hai!

unka nahi hai kasoor , gar sab ujad gaya mera,
hum hi hai begairat , jo khud ko tabah kar bathe hai!
[begairat - laperwaah(careless)]

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neha
15-08-2011, 02:02 PM
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RE: kasoor
Superb !! clap

one more writer in Hindi section...Hindi section going nice congo
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15-08-2011, 05:46 PM (This post was last modified: 17-08-2011 08:40 AM by angel.)
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RE: kasoor
(15-08-2011 02:02 PM)neha Wrote:  Superb !! clap

one more writer in Hindi section...Hindi section going nice congo

shukariya;Blush
Kai baar hum naye hokar ,purane ho jatein hai,
aur kuch puranein kisse ,naye afsaane ho jatein hai!!
main bhi unhi me se ek hoon Wink

khuda ka karm haiSmile

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neha
17-08-2011, 11:31 AM
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RE: kasoor
nice.. padkar achha laga... Smile

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17-08-2011, 01:16 PM (This post was last modified: 17-08-2011 01:17 PM by angel.)
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RE: kasoor
(17-08-2011 11:31 AM)shamsihammad Wrote:  nice.. padkar achha laga... Smile


Allah ki dua hai.........Smile
@'shamsihammad': Shukariya is beghar ko ek ghar dilane ke liye,
khushnaseeb hai hum ,ke rahein tayaar hai hume mukadar dilane ke liye!


aur saath hi aapka hindi me likhane ke liye bhi dhanyawaad Smile
.....Honored

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17-08-2011, 08:01 PM
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RE: kasoor
(17-08-2011 01:16 PM)angel Wrote:  
(17-08-2011 11:31 AM)shamsihammad Wrote:  nice.. padkar achha laga... Smile


Allah ki dua hai.........Smile
@'shamsihammad': Shukariya is beghar ko ek ghar dilane ke liye,
khushnaseeb hai hum ,ke rahein tayaar hai hume mukadar dilane ke liye!


aur saath hi aapka hindi me likhane ke liye bhi dhanyawaad Smile
.....Honored

haha... Big Grin

Abhi To Asli Manzil Pana Baqi Hai...
Abhi To Irado Ka Imtihaan Baqi Hai...
Abhi To Toli Mutthi Bhar Zameen...
Abhi Tolna Saara Aasmaan Baqi Hai ...

All the best Smile

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18-08-2011, 02:31 AM (This post was last modified: 18-08-2011 02:45 AM by angel.)
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RE: kasoor
(17-08-2011 08:01 PM)shamsihammad Wrote:  Abhi To Asli Manzil Pana Baqi Hai...
Abhi To Irado Ka Imtihaan Baqi Hai...
Abhi To Toli Mutthi Bhar Zameen...
Abhi Tolna Saara Aasmaan Baqi Hai ...

All the best Smile

Bilkul sahi kaha hai likhne waale ne Smile
aaj tak bas ye line suni to kayi baar thi...
par aaj inka matlab sahi samajh aaya Smile
........Dhanyawaad Honored

Maaf kijiye apko bhi hindi me likhana pad raha hai.......
aap chahe to english me bhi likh sakte hai.
khuda ki ibaadat to har bhasha me ho sakati hai Smile

Lekin....agar aap hindi me apni marji se likh rahe hai ......
to ....kabil-a tarif hai!Honored

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18-08-2011, 02:31 PM
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RE: kasoor
(18-08-2011 02:31 AM)angel Wrote:  
(17-08-2011 08:01 PM)shamsihammad Wrote:  Abhi To Asli Manzil Pana Baqi Hai...
Abhi To Irado Ka Imtihaan Baqi Hai...
Abhi To Toli Mutthi Bhar Zameen...
Abhi Tolna Saara Aasmaan Baqi Hai ...

All the best Smile

Bilkul sahi kaha hai likhne waale ne Smile
aaj tak bas ye line suni to kayi baar thi...
par aaj inka matlab sahi samajh aaya Smile
........Dhanyawaad Honored

Maaf kijiye apko bhi hindi me likhana pad raha hai.......
aap chahe to english me bhi likh sakte hai.
khuda ki ibaadat to har bhasha me ho sakati hai Smile

Lekin....agar aap hindi me apni marji se likh rahe hai ......
to ....kabil-a tarif hai!Honored

Zarra-nawazi ke liye shukriya... Smile Honored

hindi mai apni marzi se hi likh raha hu... bohot mushkil se koi log milte hain jinse aap aise hindi mei baat kar sakte hai... warna aksar log english ko hi preference dete hain... its good to see someone so interested in hindi Smile

afterall, hum hindi thread mei hai is waqt Tongue Big Grin

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18-08-2011, 03:12 PM (This post was last modified: 18-08-2011 03:14 PM by angel.)
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RE: kasoor
(18-08-2011 02:31 PM)shamsihammad Wrote:  Zarra-nawazi ke liye shukriya... Smile Honored

hindi mai apni marzi se hi likh raha hu... bohot mushkil se koi log milte hain jinse aap aise hindi mei baat kar sakte hai... warna aksar log english ko hi preference dete hain... its good to see someone so interested in hindi Smile

afterall, hum hindi thread mei hai is waqt Tongue Big Grin


khushanaseeb!.... ke waqt hamare pehlu me baitha hai.......
verna log kadardaan...... aise kaha milte hai.Honored

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18-08-2011, 04:07 PM
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RE: kasoor
milte hain lakh humko bura kehne waale...
kabhi dil ke mehman... aise kahan milte hain Smile Honored

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