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Hum hi hai! (New addition)
18-08-2011, 09:12 AM (This post was last modified: 18-08-2011 09:26 AM by angel.)
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Hum hi hai! (New addition)
Har shakal ke , is jahan me , hum insaan dekh chuke hai,
Bin shakal ke , pathar me bhi , bhagwaan dekh chuke hai!

Hum hi the wo , jo kal tak , darte the mot se bhi,
Hum hi hai wo , jo shehar ke sab shamshaan dekh chuke hai!

[shehar-city]

sataati thi ,kabhi,jo hawaa,mere chirago ko,
aa jaye phir, bujhaane ye gum ke sholein, ki sab makaan dekh chuke hai!

dusaro se kare gila hum , shikwaa bhi kare , magar,
un apano ka kya , jinhe jaate huien bankar anjaan dekh chuke hai!


dil to hai , kah de tumhe bewafaa , aaj bhari mehfil me ,
magar hai khamosh , ki hum apna bhi Girebaan dekh chuke hai!!

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18-08-2011, 02:40 PM
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RE: Hum hi hai! (New addition)
bohot khoob... nicely written...



gulshan the jo kabhi, unhe hum veeraan dekh chuke hain...
kehte the jo kabhi ishq ko khuda, unka hum imaan dekh chuke hain...
kiya karte the jo kabhi sare-aam daawa-e-ishq...
aaj unhe hum andheri galiyon mei gumnaam dekh chuke hain...

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18-08-2011, 03:27 PM (This post was last modified: 18-08-2011 03:37 PM by angel.)
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RE: Hum hi hai! (New addition)
(18-08-2011 02:40 PM)shamsihammad Wrote:  bohot khoob... nicely written...



gulshan the jo kabhi, unhe hum veeraan dekh chuke hain...
kehte the jo kabhi ishq ko khuda, unka hum imaan dekh chuke hain...
kiya karte the jo kabhi sare-aam daawa-e-ishq...
aaj unhe hum andheri galiyon mei gumnaam dekh chuke hain...

Koi shak nahi......aapki is shayari ke imaan me,
ki chahat hai Ibaadat-a-khuda ki.....
to main kaphir kya , tu ameer kya Honored


Kya baat hai! Smile........aapki yadasht aur sahi taalmail ki guzarish ki to daad deni padegi...... Honored
Is shayari ko to ..........naya khoobsurat mod mila hai Smile

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18-08-2011, 03:50 PM
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RE: Hum hi hai! (New addition)
shukriya...

bas ek adna si koshish ki thi humne ishq ki chaah mei...
chahat ne aisa mod liya ki fasana ban gaya...

taalmail ki guzarish?? Huh kuch samajh nahi aaya Invision18

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18-08-2011, 03:53 PM
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RE: Hum hi hai! (New addition)
(18-08-2011 03:50 PM)shamsihammad Wrote:  shukriya...

bas ek adna si koshish ki thi humne ishq ki chaah mei...
chahat ne aisa mod liya ki fasana ban gaya...

taalmail ki guzarish?? Huh kuch samajh nahi aaya Invision18

matlab rhymes Smile

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18-08-2011, 03:58 PM
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RE: Hum hi hai! (New addition)
oh.. it was an error Tongue
u need to improve your urdu Smile
dont worry.. there are many ppl here who will help you... including me ofcourse once i am good enough in it Smile

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18-08-2011, 04:40 PM
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RE: Hum hi hai! (New addition)
(18-08-2011 03:58 PM)shamsihammad Wrote:  oh.. it was an error Tongue
u need to improve your urdu Smile
dont worry.. there are many ppl here who will help you... including me ofcourse once i am good enough in it Smile

Shukariya is rehmo karam ke liye Honored
gustakhi maaf....magar wo hindi me hi thi.........

shayad mujhe taareef karna dhang se nahi aata Mybad


Mera matlab tha---'jis taalmail ki guzarish hoti hai .......aap use badi jimmedaari se pura karte hai' Smile

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18-08-2011, 04:57 PM
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RE: Hum hi hai! (New addition)
guzarish means request.. its an urdu word Smile

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18-08-2011, 05:00 PM
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RE: Hum hi hai! (New addition)
(18-08-2011 04:57 PM)shamsihammad Wrote:  guzarish means request.. its an urdu word Smile

ji....... Smile
agli baar se dhyan rakheinge Honored

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18-08-2011, 05:05 PM
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RE: Hum hi hai! (New addition)
guzarish ki jagah agar zarurat ko use karti to baat ban sakti thi Tongue

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