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Poem Without You
11-04-2011, 02:15 PM
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Without You
I am dancing - to the beat of my own drum,
And I'm finally happy with what I've done,
Letting you go - did you think it was simple?
For a while, even the stars wouldn't twinkle,
But now I've found someone who can listen to my song,
And though I'll miss you it won't be for long,
And he knows me better than you ever did,
Obviously - since you never bothered, you hid,
And now you just can't hurt me anymore,
Even though it was my heart you tore.

And I'm dancing, and I'm singing, and I'm happy...without you.

And there was this golden halo around you,
When you smiled the world smiled too,
And for a moment if you chanced to talk to me,
The world became brighter than the one I normally see,
But my heart doesn't beat any faster anymore for you,
And you don't seem the same no matter what I do,
And my breath no longer catches when I drown in your eyes,
Guess I'm finally tired of feeding myself with lies.
And you seem a little bit off-beat,
A little like you're dancing with two left feet.

While...

I'm dancing, and I'm singing and I'm happy...without you.
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18-04-2011, 12:58 AM
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RE: Without You
nice sakhi, playing good with words Big Grin

just at 16, you are writing nice Smile
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19-04-2011, 11:42 PM
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RE: Without You
I like this a lot...im not a normal fan of rhyme but you do a great job here. Not to mention I can relate well to the topicHeart

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16-07-2011, 12:31 PM (This post was last modified: 16-07-2011 12:39 PM by manisha.)
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RE: Without You
(18-04-2011 12:58 AM)anuradha Wrote:  nice sakhi, playing good with words Big Grin

just at 16, you are writing nice Smile

if you(sakhi) are 16.............so u r really mindblowing at this.
have good writings ,dear.
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