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Poem thinking of u..dedicated 2 shamsihammad
25-01-2013, 09:46 AM (This post was last modified: 25-01-2013 09:49 AM by Shakti.)
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thinking of u..dedicated 2 shamsihammad
Thinking of you
Multiple faces across the street,
Countless people I meet.
Don’ remember what or who
‘Coz I just keep thinking of you…

Even in the presence of everyone,
I can’t be happy or have fun.
No one realizes what I’m going through
The reason, I’m thinkin’ of you…

Days pass by, some exhausting some dull,
No fresh relationship I wanna kindle.
Even if the mind says, the heart ceases to,
It believes, I’m thinking of you…

It was so beautiful, as in dreams
Wasn’t aware future is filled wid screams.
Plethora of feelings, some old some new
Why the hell m I thinking of you…

All was perfect, just you and me,
Our philia and affection, liveliness ‘n glee
Situations went wrong, perhaps we too
But I swear, I was thinking of you…

Ur departure so painful, I cried ‘n I sobbed
Devastated I stood, as I was robbed
U would b so rude, I really had no clue
‘n the irony, I’m thinking of you…

I am a kid inside & so is my heart
Pure ‘n humble, having no trace of dirt
Whatever happened, I didn’t mean 2 do
Forgetting myself I keep thinking of you…

No matter, whatever it is
‘tis not about saying sorry or please
Juz wanna intimate, that my luv was true
Pardon, I’m still thinking of you…

This all means nothing now
May be I messed up, don’ know how
I know it’s quite unreasonable ado
What to do, can’t stop thinkin’ of you…

-Shakti Prateek

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25-01-2013, 09:51 AM
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RE: thinking of u..dedicated 2 shamsihammad
I hope u don' mind Shamsi
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30-01-2013, 11:48 PM
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RE: thinking of u..dedicated 2 shamsihammad
I'm stunned.. No words to express...
Btw, thanks for the dedication.. Atleast somebody dedicated me something Tongue

-- Hammad Shamsi
http://hmdfeels.blogspot.com
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31-01-2013, 11:23 PM
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RE: thinking of u..dedicated 2 shamsihammad
Stunned..?? Itz u only who inspired me 2 follow the title ''Thinkin' of u''... Bt I wsn't actually thinking of you while writing..Tongue...it ws ma ex who ws on ma mind Wink!

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31-01-2013, 11:30 PM
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RE: thinking of u..dedicated 2 shamsihammad
Pheww... Relieved now.. I took it to a different level Tongue
But, all is well now Wink
Nd thank you again for dedication.. Good work, keep it up..

-- Hammad Shamsi
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01-02-2013, 05:54 AM
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RE: thinking of u..dedicated 2 shamsihammad
M glad u think so...well m a big fan of ur literary work 'n if I've done smthn'..u r wrth it...undoubtedly...Smile

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